Jeonghwan, your story is intriguing but it does not really personify or praise the road. However, when I thought of it as a description of road, I could follow your thought. The duality and various uses of road are embedded in your ode. You transmit the idea of city into road to ode. Good job! - TA Hyebin
great! perfect! Exellent!!
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i can feel rhythm like listening a music.
thanks!!
Jeonghwan, your story is intriguing but it does not really personify or praise the road. However, when I thought of it as a description of road, I could follow your thought. The duality and various uses of road are embedded in your ode. You transmit the idea of city into road to ode. Good job! - TA Hyebin
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